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  • Ryan McBain
    started a topic Untitled: Titles are overrated

    Untitled: Titles are overrated

    It just ain't the world against me, its fate itself
    Holding me down, no where to go, nobody I can ask for help
    I've searched but never found, failure is where I'm bound
    I'm gonna die mad six feet in the ground
    Mind full of hardships, betrayal from the heartless
    Can't cut my losses and cash in, I'm all out of chips
    I use to let this one girl read my poetry
    She said it was shit, increasing depression's glory
    Maybe it hurt because I write a lot, or maybe because I thought I loved her
    Could be a little of both, but I shake it off by saying it made me stronger
    Too many chapters of my life I never want to read again
    Drinking more and more, giving in to the wrong, therefore more sin
    But I'll keep telling my story while walking through the crap
    I'm the mantic depressant, poetry is my prozak

  • AndySMC
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    This is real powerful man. One of your better ones.

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  • jay
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    100% good shit. real and worded like a champ. felt it *****

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  • Smoke
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    i like the shit that has somethin behind it, not just empty words

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  • Smoke
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    definately can relate. good shit i think thats the best verse ive seen anywhere on this board. nice to see somethin other than battles

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  • Ryan McBain
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    thanks

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  • johnny trance
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    dude...i can totally identify w/ this one. sometimes we open ourselves up to people and they just dont get it. they dont realize that poetry is a life line. good stuff man.

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