Pieces Of Me

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Pieces Of Me

02-18-2004, 10:19 PM

Pieces of me
Come from every degree
All these moments in time
From up front and behind
Though the sea meets at bay
The sand washes away
Before lyrics on tongue
Burnt like heat of the sun
A Time stood still
On breathless chill
Quickly flashes past
Before chosen cast
This movie I see
Reflect pieces of me

Last edited by Image; 02-19-2004, 7:44 AM.
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Genesis

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Join Date: Oct 2003

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02-19-2004, 12:46 PM

Short and sweet. I like the way it flowed. You got skills when it comes to poems girl.
Keep it up.
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