Only you

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Only you...
Make my world so bright...
Only you...
Turn my wrong to right...
Only you...
Give me happiness...
Only you...
Trade me more for less...
Only you...
Make my dreams come true...
Only you...
Create in me a new...
Only you...
Treasure all I'm not...
Only you...
Lead me free from rot
If only I could be more like...
...Only you.

[Cakes]

shit, wouldnt wonna step to that verse, id get torn

[Ryan McBain]

^^LOL wrong forum, I moved it

[Genesis]

Beauitful, simply beautiful.
You are the true in the world of poems.

[Genesis]

Not to take away from my previous comment, but is this really a battle rap? It's good, to say the least, but wouldn't it be more suited for the keystyle fourm, if not put back into the poetry? I just don't under stand why it was moved.

[sonofaghost]

with out a doubt i like it

[johnny trance]

only you
waste my time w/ shit like this


lol

[d.willis]

reminds me of a Motley Crue song

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It is meant for another type of reminder, if that is what it is used for... (???) But "shit like this" is often times to deep for some people, right Johnny?
- Genesis02 - All of what I write I place in the poetry realm forum. Lyrics, I wouldn't pretend to know where to begin to write ... but poetry seams come come smoothly for me. Therefore, poetry realm is the forum I place my work in. If it's moved from there, ask Ryan why... (???) I haven't a clue beyond my keyboard =) -
PS: (Genesis02/Sono***host/Cakes) Thanks for your compliments and your support!

[Genesis]

No need for thanks, you're great at what you do, therefore it's only natural that someone compliment you on you skill. And I was only wondreing about why it was moved, it was really no biggy

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See...this is why I love you, Genesis02...! You're mother taught you well...! (hahaha)
Whomever puts there heart and soul into something...most definitely will get nothing less out of it's final result. I was just blessed (by God) to have a heart with many feelings and emotions stuffed inside of it... Somehow the words of my heart flow through me. But, it's not my talent, it's God's! (I wish I could take credit!) Thanks again...!

[Genesis]

hey, thanks for posting. How did you like what I sent you, or did you get it?
lemme know.

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Loved them...!!! Great job, Genesis02. Send me more when you have time. And, as soon as I find more, I'll comment in detail to your email address. (thanks again)