THE TREE

[hymes]

TOOK A STROLL THROUGH THE PARK, WHERE I LOST MY HEART
FAIL IN LOVE WITH A TREE, FORGETTING IT SHADED ME
I BUILT A SWING ON TRUST, TILL OUR CHAINS TURN TO RUST
MUST IT POUR WHEN IT RAINS, THIS PAIN LEFT ME SPLINTERS
MADE THE AUGUST SUN FEEL LIKE THE COLD DARK WINTER
IN HER BEAUTY IS WHERE I SEEN HER GROW
SHE LEFT TIMES OF HAPPINESS AND SORROW
I GEUSS TOMARROWS NEVER PROMISED
AND YESTERDAYS ALWAYS MISSED
NOW I TAKE A FIST OF ROSES, KNOWING THAT I’LL BLEED
LEAVING ME SCARS SELF INFLICTED
CAUSE LOVES IS JUST A SICKNESS THAT EVERONE SEEMS TO CATCH
ITS THE REASON WHY SO MANY PEOPLE PARADE AROUND IN MASK
IVE LEARNED A LOT FROM TREE OF MY PAST
NOW TIMES IN THE PARK I WONDER IF LOVE CAN REALLY LAST………..

[Onix]

tight, I like the analogy of the tree and the park, you need to post more i know you got alot of shit

[hymes]

thanx when I find more time iI'll drop some writtens this is just somrthing i wrote at work..............

[Ryan McBain]

ill

TOOK A STROLL THROUGH THE PARK, WHERE I LOST MY HEART
FAIL IN LOVE WITH A TREE, FORGETTING IT SHADED ME

Man this is some nice work. Makes you realize that people sometimes take things for granted. The entire poem was ill man. Keep it coming

[hymes]

THANKS FOR THE LOVE