BEAUTIFUL

[hymes]

SMOKEY VISIONS / CLOUDY DECESSIONS
INTERMISSIONS IN RELATIONS
BECOMING A TRADITIONAL AWAKING
STILL IM WAITING PATIENTLY FOR
BODYS TOUCHING / SOULS CLUTCHING
HOLE ME CAPTIVE / BEAUTIFUL.
WHEN LOVE IS ACTIVE
NO SATISFACTION WITHOUT THE LOSS
BEAUTIFUL. WHEN LIVES CROSS

[BleedingAkasha]

Smooth. i really felt that..good job

[StaRgaZer]

Definetely nice.... I like the way it sounds when you say it outloud... if it was a little longer it could be done at a poetry slam or something... good job

[hymes]

thanx its is a little longer but i had trouble posting it
thanx .........