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  • My Poem To The World

    Money- the root of all evil.
    why? it causes evil. evil in the form of greed.
    people that have large sums of cash
    are greedy, all they want is more.
    they cannot be thankful for what they have.
    they like to flaunty it, and make more of it.
    and what happens to them. they get
    mugged, robbed, stabbed, shot and beaten to death.
    the cause, greed. greed on both parties.
    terrible crimes such as these are killing our earth.
    everyday we kill earth a little more at a time.
    we are not only thriving beings that walk he earth.
    we are a part of it. and everyday
    we contribute to the killing of a small part of earth.
    hen a 90 year old lady dies, natural or not,
    part of our earth dies. whenever two people
    decide to abort their unborn child,
    whenever a homeless man is beaten to death,
    whenever their is a war between two gangs,
    our earth dies more.
    day by day, we thrive on this planet
    taking it for granted
    but one day, the earth itself will die.
    and we, in turn, will parish.
    the next time you hear someone got shot.
    you may chuckle, or think nothing of it
    but remember, that person is contributing.
    contributing to the extinction of mankind.

    "I wrote this poem for several reasons. I am not taking cheap shots at rich people, or anything like that. But there are several personal experiences and personal views on the way life is as i view it. I am looking for any kind of feedback, positive or negative. Give me your honest opinions please."
    Last edited by chedda; 02-09-2004, 6:14 PM.

  • #2
    deep stuff here. its always good to let off steam though words. you effectively do this in this peice. keep posting!

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    • #3
      so we are lead by denial, like lambs to the slaughter
      serving empires of style and carbonated sugar water
      and the old farm road is a four lane that leads to the mall
      and our dreams are all guillotines, waiting to fall....
      - Ani Difranco

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      • #4
        uh...yeah. my thoughts exactly.

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        • #5
          It was just meant to agree with what you were saying about money and greed..... that the things we want to make us happy are the very things that bring us down.........

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